Wednesday, April 13, 2011

HW 45 - Reply to Other Peoples' Comments

Reply to Devin's Comment:

Thank you for your comment Devin. I agree when you said I should have asked them what kind of jobs they are assigned. I guess that slipped my mind during the interview since before going there i was hoping to interview the mothers not the workers. Thank you for complementing my use of descriptive writing in describing the PATH center. I was reading some of the "good model"s' blogs and I noticed that many of you guys describe everything in detail so I tried implementing that in my own writing. If the 100% success rate is in fact accurate then yes, it is wonderful, but then again, that was said by a worker there so I'm not sure if he really is willing to speak negatively about his job.

Reply to Dev's (Protege) Comment:


Thank you for your comment. Those mothers are in a very delicate situation in their lives. I don't think anyone growing up imagine living in a homeless shelter when they are older so PATH does a very good job in protecting their dignity so they don't break down and fall into depression which for them will probably be very easy to do. I also like the fact that you enjoyed my project and I hope you will consider switching to Andy's class next semester.

Reply to Mentor's Comment:

Thank you for your comment. I agree with you when you said that I would have gotten a better and more accurate perspective of PATH if I had personally interviewed one or two of the mothers but because of the agreement PATH signed with the mothers when they provided them with shelter, I could not do this. If I was given another opportunity at doing this project, I would definitely go back to PATH and request a special interview and I bet if I tell them that it is for a school project that will promote PATH, they will surely be able to help me out.